Updated doc & samples to address Rome's feedback.

content/code_samples/escrow/websocket/account_objects-request-sender.json

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 {
   "id": 5,
   "command": "account_objects",
-  "account": "r9yALWi9X6Hz2pQxeXcDbBazvsqEBsukgG",
+  "account": "rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm",
   "ledger_index": "validated",
   "type": "escrow"
 }

content/code_samples/escrow/websocket/account_objects-response-sender.json

@@ -1,46 +1,58 @@
 {
   "id": 5,
   "result": {
-    "account": "r9yALWi9X6Hz2pQxeXcDbBazvsqEBsukgG",
+    "account": "rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm",
     "account_objects": [{
-      "Account": "r9yALWi9X6Hz2pQxeXcDbBazvsqEBsukgG",
+      "Account": "rafD3taonqdnVpaxCCT6sjnScZUeFGf1JG",
-      "Amount": "2500",
-      "Destination": "rLpLGbSaUwEp6RgLCkjBGTHupfKJMkUjiw",
-      "DestinationNode": "0000000000000000",
-      "FinishAfter": 570672000,
-      "Flags": 0,
-      "LedgerEntryType": "Escrow",
-      "OwnerNode": "0000000000000000",
-      "PreviousTxnID": "F403A36E7A05898C68ADF5DC788FC69AF15C34DD84B6AB5345A34320D2BB5489",
-      "PreviousTxnLgrSeq": 4570102,
-      "index": "07CFC2B7D9B7E8484B39403D00A851E2FD556CEE410EB682D1E9C912CF4ED6FB"
-    }, {
-      "Account": "r9yALWi9X6Hz2pQxeXcDbBazvsqEBsukgG",
-      "Amount": "2500",
-      "Destination": "rLwsbsEHu3yWn6FBEfXz6B7iwZmxMeY9H7",
-      "DestinationNode": "0000000000000000",
-      "FinishAfter": 570672000,
-      "Flags": 0,
-      "LedgerEntryType": "Escrow",
-      "OwnerNode": "0000000000000000",
-      "PreviousTxnID": "56780536AC1B85029143634416434CAE374213732FDBB284574F2CD8B826A868",
-      "PreviousTxnLgrSeq": 4570083,
-      "index": "250AF3071E37089C920832BBF56E66BAA0940F698F48418A9D65D9970C555EE9"
-    }, {
-      "Account": "r9yALWi9X6Hz2pQxeXcDbBazvsqEBsukgG",
       "Amount": "250",
-      "Destination": "rLpLGbSaUwEp6RgLCkjBGTHupfKJMkUjiw",
+      "Destination": "rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm",
       "DestinationNode": "0000000000000000",
       "FinishAfter": 570672000,
       "Flags": 0,
       "LedgerEntryType": "Escrow",
       "OwnerNode": "0000000000000000",
-      "PreviousTxnID": "E6F60C460D768E4C833C14B89168929AAA538374BE5720B9112530AE04E651A5",
+      "PreviousTxnID": "A0951691DF3BCBEEB3108F2229A702D078BBBF848268BC601E59B68A2E390AAC",
-      "PreviousTxnLgrSeq": 4570975,
+      "PreviousTxnLgrSeq": 4602906,
-      "index": "4720F356A6F6A0C3A62D3E3AD72DF05AF45458D3124998D2BFE1CB085E55E302"
+      "index": "2BF3226ACCA8FF7ACB7201F20A701F51D8666A2FA2FBFBE6A05C9161F9228A18"
+    }, {
+      "Account": "rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm",
+      "Amount": "250",
+      "Destination": "r9gyNNzhMtfwZara61u3ycfMLdkTpKJZHX",
+      "DestinationNode": "0000000000000000",
+      "FinishAfter": 570672000,
+      "Flags": 0,
+      "LedgerEntryType": "Escrow",
+      "OwnerNode": "0000000000000000",
+      "PreviousTxnID": "463D5A3CF09F4890B8471027F80414B3B438E6907425B71DC324D7118E90A107",
+      "PreviousTxnLgrSeq": 4603003,
+      "index": "35462CDC28AD830B29D101E8307AF5B6BFBC262F1BDCCA7EB45D1CA3F8B44F53"
+    }, {
+      "Account": "r9gyNNzhMtfwZara61u3ycfMLdkTpKJZHX",
+      "Amount": "250",
+      "Destination": "rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm",
+      "DestinationNode": "0000000000000000",
+      "FinishAfter": 570672000,
+      "Flags": 0,
+      "LedgerEntryType": "Escrow",
+      "OwnerNode": "0000000000000000",
+      "PreviousTxnID": "08C9B20AC9EB191238038A108CC4CBBC0243672484B466FB42DED0A7DF6A31A1",
+      "PreviousTxnLgrSeq": 4602954,
+      "index": "A7B0983A1B53D92278E21499064A4F8BBE08CB8D14DB6BBBA8F688AB1D3FDA45"
+    }, {
+      "Account": "rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm",
+      "Amount": "250",
+      "Destination": "rafD3taonqdnVpaxCCT6sjnScZUeFGf1JG",
+      "DestinationNode": "0000000000000000",
+      "FinishAfter": 570672000,
+      "Flags": 0,
+      "LedgerEntryType": "Escrow",
+      "OwnerNode": "0000000000000000",
+      "PreviousTxnID": "F4778F528AB3CB945BDB88036EF9FE6C0E899F1629D9E51129E3B93CD488395A",
+      "PreviousTxnLgrSeq": 4602977,
+      "index": "F99A4DDADDDF623908C9A048170AB107AFF78684AB8F3110E9F00BBBC606ABD2"
     }],
-    "ledger_hash": "007E15650382AC1B1482FF245FC52080C5379E278A92169C50BAD3608A16123E",
+    "ledger_hash": "1D4850035F175CA6F1CD5CE3B53C01AA83E4F086C13085E4FBC1EEFCCB345A9B",
-    "ledger_index": 4570985,
+    "ledger_index": 4603176,
     "validated": true
   },
   "status": "success",

content/tutorial-escrow.md

@@ -6,7 +6,6 @@ The XRP Ledger supports held payments, or _escrows_, that can be executed only a
 - [Send a conditionally-held escrow](#send-a-conditionally-held-escrow)
 - [Cancel an expired escrow](#cancel-an-expired-escrow)
 - [Look up escrows](#look-up-escrows)
-<!-- {# Doesn't work yet:- Look up escrows by destination #}-->
 
 
 ## Send a Time-Held Escrow
@@ -517,13 +516,13 @@ In the above example, `r3wN3v2vTUkr5qd6daqDc2xE4LSysdVjkT` is the sender of the
 
 All pending escrows are stored in the ledger as [Escrow objects](reference-ledger-format.html#escrow).
 
-You can look up escrow nodes by [sender](#look-up-escrows-by-sender) or [receiver](#look-up-escrows-by-receiver) using the [`account_objects`](reference-rippled.html#account-objects) method.
+You can look up escrow objects by the [sender's address](#look-up-escrows-by-sender-address) or the [receiver's address](#look-up-escrows-by-receiver-address) using the [`account_objects`](reference-rippled.html#account-objects) method.
 
-###Look up escrows by sender
+###Look up escrows by sender address
 
-You can use the [`account_objects`](reference-rippled.html#account-objects) method to look up escrows by sender.
+You can use the [`account_objects`](reference-rippled.html#account-objects) method to look up escrow objects by sender address.
 
-The following examples illustrate an escrow lookup by sender. Note that the `account` in the request is the sender `Account` of the escrow `account_objects` returned in the response.
+Let's say that you want to look up all pending escrow objects with a sender address of `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm`. You can do this using the following example request, where the sender address is the `account` value.
 
 Request:
 
@@ -537,6 +536,11 @@ _Websocket_
 
 <!-- MULTICODE_BLOCK_END -->
 
+
+The response will look something like the following example. Note that the response includes all pending escrow objects with `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm` as the sender or receiver address, where the sender address is the `Account` value and the receiver address is the `Destination` value.
+
+In this case, the second and fourth escrow objects have `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm` as their sender address (`Account`) value and are what we are looking for.
+
 Response:
 
 <!-- MULTICODE_BLOCK_START -->
@@ -549,13 +553,13 @@ _Websocket_
 
 <!-- MULTICODE_BLOCK_END -->
 
-###Look up escrows by receiver
+###Look up escrows by receiver address
 
-You can use the [`account_objects`](reference-rippled.html#account-objects) method to look up escrows by receiver address.
+You can use the [`account_objects`](reference-rippled.html#account-objects) method to look up escrow objects by receiver address.
 
-Look up by receiver is possible for only pending escrows created after [fix1523](concept-amendments.html#fix1523) was enabled for rippled 0.80.0 on 2017-11-14.
+You can only look up pending escrow objects by receiver address if those escrows were created after the [fix1523 amendment](concept-amendments.html#fix1523) was enabled on 2017-11-14.
 
-The following examples illustrate an escrow lookup by receiver. Note that the `account` in the request is the receiver `Destination` of the escrow `account_objects` returned in the response.
+Let's say that you want to look up all pending escrow objects with a receiver address of `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm`. You can do this using the following example request, where the receiver address is the `account` value.
 
 Request:
 
@@ -564,11 +568,16 @@ Request:
 _Websocket_
 
 ```json
-{% include 'code_samples/escrow/websocket/account_objects-request-receiver.json' %}
+{% include 'code_samples/escrow/websocket/account_objects-request-sender.json' %}
 ```
 
 <!-- MULTICODE_BLOCK_END -->
 
+
+The response will look something like the following example. Note that the response includes all pending escrow objects with `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm` as the receiver or sender address, where the receiver address is the `Destination` value and the sender address is the `Account` value.
+
+In this case, the first and third escrow objects have `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm` as their receiver address (`Destination`) value and are what we are looking for.
+
 Response:
 
 <!-- MULTICODE_BLOCK_START -->
@@ -576,7 +585,7 @@ Response:
 _Websocket_
 
 ```json
-{% include 'code_samples/escrow/websocket/account_objects-response-receiver.json' %}
+{% include 'code_samples/escrow/websocket/account_objects-response-sender.json' %}
 ```
 
 <!-- MULTICODE_BLOCK_END -->