From 42f983fe5ffb663da7b156876cf958e05af9db83 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jennifer Hasegawa Date: Mon, 4 Dec 2017 11:01:43 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] addressed comments from Rome --- content/tutorial-escrow.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/tutorial-escrow.md b/content/tutorial-escrow.md index 561aa1b73b..12ec7631f5 100644 --- a/content/tutorial-escrow.md +++ b/content/tutorial-escrow.md @@ -537,9 +537,9 @@ _Websocket_ -The response will look something like the following example. Note that the response includes all pending escrow objects with `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm` as the sender or receiver address, where the sender address is the `Account` value and the receiver address is the `Destination` value. +The response resembles the following example. Note that the response includes all pending escrow objects with `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm` as the sender or receiver address, where the sender address is the `Account` value and the receiver address is the `Destination` value. -In this case, the second and fourth escrow objects have `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm` as their sender address (`Account`) value and are what we are looking for. +In this example, the second and fourth escrow objects meet our lookup criteria because their `Account` (sender address) values are set to `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm`. Response: @@ -574,9 +574,9 @@ _Websocket_ -The response will look something like the following example. Note that the response includes all pending escrow objects with `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm` as the receiver or sender address, where the receiver address is the `Destination` value and the sender address is the `Account` value. +The response resembles the following example. Note that the response includes all pending escrow objects with `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm` as the receiver or sender address, where the receiver address is the `Destination` value and the sender address is the `Account` value. -In this case, the first and third escrow objects have `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm` as their receiver address (`Destination`) value and are what we are looking for. +In this example, the first and third escrow objects meet our lookup criteria because their `Destination` (receiver address) values are set to `rfztBskAVszuS3s5Kq7zDS74QtHrw893fm`. Response: